Cinderella pays a visit A collaborative story Part 1 by Hanfir, Samkni, Kimsad & Jamhar (in South Africa) Part 2 by Andrés, Mateo and Lucas (in Argentina)

Part 1: An unusual visitor

   One night the rain poured down, the thunder roared and the lightning flashed brightly. There was a mom and her two girls, (the moms daughters), and they were watching T.V.They were watching Cinderella. It was very interesting and enjoyable, and then they heard a knock at the door.

Their mom opened the door. She could hardly believe her eyes. It was Cinderella. "Can I come in?“ " Of course," said the mom.

So Cinderella came into the house and watched the movie about herself with the girls. She asked, "What are your names?" " My name is Sarah," said the girl on the left.  "My name is Jade," said the girl on the right.  "What is your mum's name?" The mom was in the kitchen making tea " Our mom's name is Mary." 

After the movie they went downstairs to their rooms and when they got downstairs they played sme more with their new friend, Cinderella.  Then the lightning flashed and the thunder roared. It was a very scary storm. They...... 

Part 2: The mystery of the autographs

They were afraid sitting on the sofa in front the TV. They asked Cinderella if they could have her autograph. Suddenly they heard someone knocking at the door. They were frightened and asked each other who it could be. They were on the sofa and they decided to go and see who it was. The first one who went was Cinderella, and when she came back she had blood over her leg. She was very frightened from what she had seen and she couldn’t  say anything. She said she was going to wash the blood off her leg.

Mary-Jade and Shara were worried and nervous. They went upstairs later to talk to Cinderella but she was sleeping in a bed. She held a strange paper.  It was a paper of autographs.  She woke up and reacted in a strange way. She said she was tired of writing autographs for people.  She had once written autographs for a whole week and that was all she ever did.  She said, “Do you know why I have come here?" Every one said, "No".

Cinderella responded “Its because I'm am really tired of writing autographs". She continued "Now unfortunately I have to go to another house nearby. " Cinderella left the house but some minutes later she came running back and as fast as she could, and she asked if she could hide inside their house.  She was scared and she didn't want to be outside.  She never said why.  Their mom appeared and was wondering what all this was about.

One day Mary was cooking in the kitchen and she heard a knock on the door. She opened it and found Cinderella again. She tumbled all over her and she was wet and cold. "I can explain everything," she said.

Cinderella told them the whole story. What had actually happened was that Cinderella had loved writing autographs but she was tired of so much luxury and wanted to be a normal girl. That was the reason why she went from house to house after everybody had only wanted an autorgraph from her. What had also happened was when the mysterious knock on the door had happened, there were naughty kids throwing tomatoes at her. They all sat down and ate over-cooked beef for dinner. THE END