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A three-nation collaborative story The Plan Part 1 by Hamman in South Africa Part 2 by in Emil in Canada Part 3 by in Agus and Domi in Argentina

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Part 1: A dangerous climb

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It was three times as large as me, but I was going to try anyway. I went up the elevator and I said to myself, "Do I really want to do this?" My father told me to be brave. Soon we were on top of the building.

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Part 2: The crystal bone

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I got out at the top and my dad followed. We had to get to the secret weapon before they did. It was hidden somewhere up here and only one person knew exactly where. My dad! My dad said I should follow him so I did. He jumped into a little hole and slid down almost an entire level, i jumped in after him and almost landed on him. He opened a door that didn't look anything like a door. It was just a flat piece of metal with a hole the size of a pencil.

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He opened it and there it was, a glimmering, shining long sword. Then we heard footsteps above us. Would they find us or even see the slide? I was scared half to death, but dad knew what to do. He told me to be as quiet as possible. He got up and moved as slowly and quietly as he could. There was a gate and I guessed it led into the elevator. We got to our car and one of the grunts saw us leaving. We had got away just in time, because more grunts were showing up.

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We were driving by our house when we saw our house being raided. Dad just kept driving by as if nothing was happening. He went to Grandpa's house and we slept there for a few days until dad got a call. There was another thing Control had figured that DR. Hander The evil scientist and his grunts would go after. It was the crystal bone.

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This was a bone that had crystal throughout it. It is worth millions, but has been missing since 1977. Control figures it is somewhere in Brazil and we think "Dr. H" is already headed there. We went back to our house to get some things and make sure "Dr. H" didn't find anything he wasn't supposed to.  He had found one compartment that held our special communication device. He might be able to track the signal to Control so we had them disconnect it. We got a few other things and got on a plane to Brazil.

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When we got there we decided the best way to find it was to follow "Dr. H" so we used a tracking gun. We got a sniper scope and put it on the gun and shot the tracking device on to the car they were using. The first one missed, but my dad never misses twice. He hit the car on the back right under the spare tyre. We followed them for hours, and then they stopped. They got out of the car and started to dig a hole. We watched and then they stopped digging and pulled a chest out of the ground. It was locked and they just shot the lock a lot of times.

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They opened the chest and it had the bone. We had found the bone, but it was not in our possession. We followed them to a hotel. Then they left and we followed them again. They went to a casino. So we went back to the hotel to get the bone. We threw knockout gas into the room. We put on gas masks and went in. There was only one guard in there. I was suprised. We went into the chest to grab it and I just kew something was wrong. Dad opened it and the bone wasn't there, only more knockout gas. It was a good thing we left our masks on.  

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We went to the casino and found "Dr.H“. He was a the blackjack table. I saw the bone coming out of his pocket and I saw my dad making a plan. He was going to rig a slots machine so "Dr.H" would win. He saw "Dr.H" heading to one so he got in behind it and made it so he would win. "Dr.H" went to a different one. He started to play it, so dad snuck behind it and tried to fiddle with that one as quite as possible. He did it "Dr.H" won. He went to grab the money from where it was coming out and my dad went to grab the crystal bone. He got it. Only one problem "Dr.H" saw him my dad ran and so did "Dr.H". My dad was way faster than him and got to a taxi. I didn't know what to do. Dad had left and there was no plan, so this was my time to shine and show my dad I can do stuff just like him.

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My plan was simple, but elegant. I would shoot a gun while wearing latex gloves, then drop the gun and run. Everyone would scatter and they wouldn’t notice me running out the door if everyone else was doing it too. I shot the gun. It was just a cap gun so it somehow it hit someone. It wouldn't do as much damage as a regular gun. Everyone started to scatter. It worked. I got as far away as possible. Then I tried to call my dad but he didn't answer.

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What had happened to him? I went to where we were watching the hotel from and Ii found him. He had a gun shot wound on his leg. He couldn't really walk so I stole a car a the hotel. The people were just checking in and had left their car was still running with the keys in. So I drove it closer to dad. Then I got out and carried him into the car. I put him into the car and drove him to the airport. When we got there he got first aid and we flew back to New York.

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Part 3: Please help my father

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When we were about to land in the airport, my father was about to run out  of blood.  We had to wait about twenty minutes until the plain was completely empty so that we could get out from it.  We were already out of the plane. We had run out of the first aid kit, but we accidentally saw my grandmother.  She was the most certificated nurse in all New York. She never travelled without her first aid kit and with an ambulance near her!  She was an excellent grandmother and an even better nurse. She couldn't afford to see her son running out of blood, so she ran as fast as she could and immediately called the ambulance that was waiting for her outside.  Two hours past and the doctor and my grandmother decided to take my father to the best hospital in the city.  When we arrived there my grandmother came to inform us that my father was seriously injured and that he would have to remain in the hospital for sixteen days.  I was quite sad but I knew that my granny would take care of him extremely well.  

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The day after I remembered about the bone!!!  I came running into the room but my father wasn't there. There was a person sitting down next to the bed with two police officers next to him, and he looked just like "Doctor H".  I though for a moment  and then went running to get the nurse. She didn't answer but she looked at me with an astonished face.  I think she didn't know what to say but I immediately realized what she meant,  "Doctor H" had disconnected my  father’s machines and that had led to his death.  I started crying and I directed myself to the bedroom. I almost killed "Doctor H".  

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Time past and I got used not to having a father THE END

Summary: A children's story

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